Comments on: TINDERBOX & HYPERTEXT: A New Hyperfiction Writer! http://susangibb.net/blog2/2009/12/tinderbox-hypertext-a-new-hyperfiction-writer/ Wed, 07 Jul 2010 10:28:02 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: susan http://susangibb.net/blog2/2009/12/tinderbox-hypertext-a-new-hyperfiction-writer/comment-page-1/#comment-529 susan Sun, 06 Dec 2009 20:19:00 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog2/?p=2574#comment-529 I just love the way you refer to straight text as 2d meaning hypertext is 3d and that's just such a great way of looking at it! On point #3, I've gotten lost in 2d; but maybe that's just me. Point #4 is a good one. I found that writing into the little spaces was like writing microfiction, each one wanting to be complete in itself but better for its relationship to the others. And yes, you can easily rearrange the paths from the way I chose to link them to reflect your guiding the reader to a specific train of thought. You're a quick learner! I just love the way you refer to straight text as 2d meaning hypertext is 3d and that’s just such a great way of looking at it!

On point #3, I’ve gotten lost in 2d; but maybe that’s just me.

Point #4 is a good one. I found that writing into the little spaces was like writing microfiction, each one wanting to be complete in itself but better for its relationship to the others.

And yes, you can easily rearrange the paths from the way I chose to link them to reflect your guiding the reader to a specific train of thought. You’re a quick learner!

]]> By: finnegan flawnt http://susangibb.net/blog2/2009/12/tinderbox-hypertext-a-new-hyperfiction-writer/comment-page-1/#comment-528 finnegan flawnt Sun, 06 Dec 2009 18:58:41 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog2/?p=2574#comment-528 i am SO chuffed and grateful, susan! i've put a short commentary on my and others' reading of the HT version in the fictionaut group. to summarise here diff between the HT and the 2d version of the story: - the hypertext version is a completely different read from 2d - the writing itself comes out more (it's a gestalt thing bc you can choose what's in the foreground) - it's possible to "get lost" in the story (not possible in 2d, not in such a short piece) - HT seems to require individual pieces to be relatively self contained (this does not work equally well for all sections). a possible good start for an editing process - getting back to a bit previously read allows for a closer reading which is not a "second reading" (as when you start over from the beginning) - the 2d story does not enforce any particular way of linking its parts. it would be interesting to map this out differently and check the effect. i am SO chuffed and grateful, susan! i’ve put a short commentary on my and others’ reading of the HT version in the fictionaut group. to summarise here diff between the HT and the 2d version of the story:

- the hypertext version is a completely different read from 2d
- the writing itself comes out more (it’s a gestalt thing bc you can choose what’s in the foreground)
- it’s possible to “get lost” in the story (not possible in 2d, not in such a short piece)
- HT seems to require individual pieces to be relatively self contained (this does not work equally well for all sections). a possible good start for an editing process
- getting back to a bit previously read allows for a closer reading which is not a “second reading” (as when you start over from the beginning)
- the 2d story does not enforce any particular way of linking its parts. it would be interesting to map this out differently and check the effect.

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