{"id":412,"date":"2007-11-13T09:17:16","date_gmt":"2007-11-13T16:17:16","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/?p=412"},"modified":"2007-11-13T09:17:16","modified_gmt":"2007-11-13T16:17:16","slug":"storyspace-doorways","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/2007\/11\/storyspace-doorways\/","title":{"rendered":"STORYSPACE: Doorways"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span class=\"drop\">G<\/span>oing through <em>Paths<\/em> for language use, typos, that kind of thing because I thought the cycles had been complete.&nbsp; A passage holds me within a certain Writing Space.&nbsp; It&#8217;s towards the end of this particular path, and is part of the original writing.&nbsp; I&#8217;ve read it maybe a hundred times or more, and yet&#8230;why didn&#8217;t I see this, the choice and possibilities?<\/p>\n<p>I really, really think that the format of Writing Spaces focuses the writer (and hopefully, the reader) on the words as well as the episodic nature of the environment.&nbsp; In this case, it was always a lead towards the end:<\/p>\n<blockquote dir=\"ltr\">\n<p><em>I wonder if I were a bird, if I could be a seagull.&nbsp; I think I&#8217;m not as graceful now.&nbsp; I think perhaps I&#8217;d have to be a rounded mourning dove, with the whirring flutter that never allows complete free flight and that peculiar pecking walk that seems so timid and afraid.&nbsp; I carry my shoes and walk along the slip and sliding water&#8217;s edge to feel the moving silt beneath bare feet. <\/em><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Man, that&#8217;s like wide open.&nbsp; Yet I&#8217;d put an ending to it within a couple more paragraphs.&nbsp; Being forced to see this excerpt without the next what I&#8217;ll call &#8216;predetermined action,&#8217; since this what is set in place, I&#8217;m seeing something else happening.&nbsp; In the split second between this and the next moment for this character, in that split second that I as writer have separated the text into Writing Spaces, this character does something other than what I had expected.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Now <em>that&#8217;s<\/em> what I think Storyspace does for creative production.&nbsp; Contradictory to its visual small border of Writing Space, it offers not merely more white space to fill with words that progress the story, but unlimited spaces that can continue a thread, or fork off again.&nbsp; The end is <em>not<\/em> in sight, creatively, nor technically with the visual maps and charts of the program. The last text box is never automatically the last.&nbsp; And never necessarily remains where it is within the story. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p><span class=\"drop\">G<\/span>oing through Paths for language use, typos, that kind of thing because I thought the cycles had been complete.&nbsp; A passage holds me within a certain Writing Space.&nbsp; It&#8217;s towards the end of this particular path, and is part of the original writing.&nbsp; I&#8217;ve read it maybe a hundred times or more, and yet&#8230;why didn&#8217;t [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"nf_dc_page":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[4],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-412","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-storyspace"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/412","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=412"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/412\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=412"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=412"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=412"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}