{"id":425,"date":"2007-11-09T07:54:00","date_gmt":"2007-11-09T14:54:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/?p=425"},"modified":"2007-11-09T07:54:00","modified_gmt":"2007-11-09T14:54:00","slug":"storyspace-weak-links","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/2007\/11\/storyspace-weak-links\/","title":{"rendered":"STORYSPACE: Weak Links"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span class=\"drop\">I<\/span>n rewriting the second story, I can so much more easily see that it was indeed the &quot;weak link&quot; in the chain.&nbsp; <\/p>\n<p>Told in first person of a character who has such an impact on the entire piece, it needed to be delved into deeper.&nbsp; Instead, it fell flat.&nbsp; Sort of an afterthought, and it was and it shows.&nbsp; But the guy needs to have a say, a rebuttal perhaps it may be called, to all the questions raised about him by the other characters.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m not sure that this wouldn&#8217;t have occured to me in linear format, but what makes it so much easier in Storyspace as a reading form is that drop-ins, thoughts out of the blue or minimally related, the niggling little questions sparked by a phrase, are not only allowable, but encouraged.<\/p>\n<p>It is indeed, the process of building a story.&nbsp; Architecture of narrative using language and presentation.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p><span class=\"drop\">I<\/span>n rewriting the second story, I can so much more easily see that it was indeed the &quot;weak link&quot; in the chain.&nbsp; Told in first person of a character who has such an impact on the entire piece, it needed to be delved into deeper.&nbsp; Instead, it fell flat.&nbsp; Sort of an afterthought, and it [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"nf_dc_page":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[4],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-425","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-storyspace"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/425","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=425"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/425\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=425"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=425"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/susangibb.net\/blog2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=425"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}