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Comments on: 012/100 aka 152/365 https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110 Flash Fiction by Susan Gibb Fri, 10 Mar 2023 02:12:37 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.1 By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-63 Thu, 02 Jun 2011 10:10:08 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-63 In reply to Neha.

Thank you, Neha.

]]> By: Neha https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-62 Thu, 02 Jun 2011 03:50:43 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-62 It’s done 🙂 Reminds me of a Kundera I once read.

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-61 Thu, 02 Jun 2011 00:33:12 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-61 In reply to George Sebastian-Coleman.

Thanks, George! I keep picking at it but I think it’s done.

]]> By: George Sebastian-Coleman https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-60 Wed, 01 Jun 2011 20:57:48 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-60 Second Steve’s motion. Really nice and controlled. The piece you linked to is good, but this takes it and really crafts an image.

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-57 Wed, 01 Jun 2011 18:10:46 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-57 In reply to steve ersinghaus.

Thanks, Steve. I’ve cut another 20 words away where there was awkward phrasing and too much explanation. I’ve noticed that in many of the project pieces, spiders, birds, and other things have established themselves as firmly as Marquez’s parrot and begonias.

]]> By: steve ersinghaus https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-55 Wed, 01 Jun 2011 16:08:36 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=110#comment-55 This is nice and tight and wonderful sustained motif.

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