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By: Amrita

Amrita — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 19:56:44 +0000

lovely! i have often wondered over this same conundrum of just slightly missing things, and perhaps the notion of whether we are “meant to” miss such things.

By: susan

susan — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 09:45:34 +0000

Thanks, Marcus! I liked the idea of a major life decision becoming so complicated simply because he couldn’t see the facts.

By: Marcus Speh

Marcus Speh — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 09:29:28 +0000

how clever and fun. the pelicans as messengers of good things – talk, food, ease…- and the protagonist clinging to his aquarium. metaphors where “i know what i meant”…ha, don’t i know it. brilliant piece.

By: susan

susan — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 09:24:46 +0000

In reply to Brendan Ford. Thank you, Brendan. As you know, I've been reading all your work as well and like your intensity and focus.

By: Brendan Ford

Brendan Ford — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 02:36:19 +0000

An avid reader of your work, a fan of your words, I envy you your ease.

By: susan

susan — Tue, 07 Jun 2011 19:11:22 +0000

Gee, and I was thinking more along the lines of “Deliverance.”

By: Steve Veilleux

Steve Veilleux — Tue, 07 Jun 2011 19:00:22 +0000

Fun Story; glad I could provide the inspiration. I’m picturing a 5-minute short playing before a movie like “Rio”.