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By: susan

susan — Fri, 24 Jun 2011 15:01:10 +0000

Thank you, Billie!

By: billie williams

billie williams — Fri, 24 Jun 2011 14:30:20 +0000

great story, susan!

By: susan

susan — Fri, 24 Jun 2011 00:30:23 +0000

Thanks, Susan. I appreciate it!

By: Susan Ersinghaus

Susan Ersinghaus — Thu, 23 Jun 2011 23:09:49 +0000

Very creepy & unsettling = very well done.

By: susan

susan — Thu, 23 Jun 2011 15:08:07 +0000

Thank you, Steve. As always, the story started with the opening line and ran away on its own from there. I didn’t intend consciously to explore the relationship between the two characters but there ya go.

By: Steve Veilleux

Steve Veilleux — Thu, 23 Jun 2011 14:56:35 +0000

Interesting treatment of (the breakdown of) the sacred trust between patient and doctor. On an emotional level at least, patient is as fragile as the trapped moth in the hands of its rescuer.

Funny, in my head, I hear myself saying “It’s Joe’s fault” from yr “Transparency” piece.