Comments on: 035/100 aka 175/365

By: susan

susan — Tue, 28 Jun 2011 13:36:59 +0000

In reply to Marcus Speh. Thank you, kind sir. This one was a vision that I tried to put into words.

By: Marcus Speh

Marcus Speh — Tue, 28 Jun 2011 06:10:05 +0000

beautiful prose, susan, just great. enjoyed this heartachingly.

By: susan

susan — Fri, 24 Jun 2011 20:30:13 +0000

Steve, I think my version is just closer to the reality whereas yours looks into trying to make some good of it, some sense of relationships that are terminated by loss of mind or life. Susan, I hear ya. I think my own experience with my mother sneaks into many of my stories. Hang in there, it takes forever to end too soon. Thank you both.

By: Susan Ersinghaus

Susan Ersinghaus — Fri, 24 Jun 2011 19:30:50 +0000

So close to home with my Mom. Really well done.

By: Steve Veilleux

Steve Veilleux — Fri, 24 Jun 2011 19:13:07 +0000

Much more in-depth examination of the end-of-life/reality fade than my Day 29 Old Man fable, but thinking she could be a close relative. – really like the last paragraph.