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Comments on: 044/100 aka 184/365 https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257 Flash Fiction by Susan Gibb Fri, 10 Mar 2023 02:27:21 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.1 By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-249 Tue, 05 Jul 2011 18:32:48 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-249 In reply to Marcus Speh.

Oh thank you, Marcus! Sometimes you just write, you know?

]]> By: Marcus Speh https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-247 Tue, 05 Jul 2011 17:54:42 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-247 exquisitely philosophical & deeply connected. especially love that last paragraph. landing on a patch the size of ant’s footprint…

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-246 Tue, 05 Jul 2011 16:10:31 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-246 In reply to steve ersinghaus.

Thanks, Steve. Tried to get away from the double use of “eye” but haven’t thought of another way of putting it yet

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-244 Tue, 05 Jul 2011 16:08:00 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-244 In reply to Jonathan Blais.

Was in one of them there “poetic” moods, where all the years gather together. Thanks, Jonathan!

]]> By: steve ersinghaus https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-243 Tue, 05 Jul 2011 14:09:41 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-243 It has a wonderful meditative quality. A patience. Favorite stuff: “The sun shone from the center of a child’s eye, the moon in the opaque eye of the elderly.”

]]> By: Jonathan Blais https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-241 Mon, 04 Jul 2011 14:22:10 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=257#comment-241 The details are great here. The explanations and details of youth and age bring the concept to life. Love and it’s exaggerations call on some nostalgic element that the reader can see and feel.

Thank you

Jonathan Blais

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