Comments on: 365/365 – THE LAST STORY

By: susan

susan — Tue, 03 Jan 2012 15:24:23 +0000

In reply to Steve Veilleux. Gotcha--thank you for catching that!

By: Steve Veilleux

Steve Veilleux — Tue, 03 Jan 2012 15:08:16 +0000

Yes, twisting reality is what we all do, but my comment had to do with twisted REALTY; as depicted in paragraph 5, might be more of a Stephen King story.

By: susan

susan — Tue, 03 Jan 2012 14:33:22 +0000

Thank you, Steve. Yes, it was my thought or concept about twisting reality into fiction. I sort of think that perception, and certainly memory for the long term, turns all reality into something other than pure truth. And no–thanks, but I am not continuing the daily stories; though I’m sure to be writing them in some form every day!

By: Steve Veilleux

Steve Veilleux — Tue, 03 Jan 2012 13:40:29 +0000

I like what you’ve done with this piece – more a meta-story than a story, but nonetheless intriguing. It is filled with possibility, and as often the case with your stories, a repast of relationships. Particularly enjoyed the puppet metaphor, which contains within it the heart of fiction, and plays in my head in an unsteady dance between reality and un-reality (speaking of which, fiction as twisted realty plays interestingly, but perhaps not your intent in next to last Paragraph).

Congratulations on the year’s worth of work – I’m sure you’ll continue – piece 366 of 3653 works for me.