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Comments on: 008/100 aka 148/365 https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84 Flash Fiction by Susan Gibb Fri, 10 Mar 2023 02:16:02 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.1 By: 009 – innisfree | 1Hundred https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-34 Sun, 29 May 2011 06:48:01 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-34 […] Inspired by Susan Gibb.  […]

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-33 Sat, 28 May 2011 16:27:00 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-33 In reply to Steve Veilleux.

Thanks so much, Steve. I love focusing on human nature and reactions and the short form or flash fiction teaches so much about getting everything set up quickly.

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-32 Sat, 28 May 2011 16:25:06 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-32 Uh-oh, did I change POV? You mean plural to singular first person? Usually I have a big problem with keeping in tense; don’t tell me I wander in and out of character too!

And you’re free to do whatever you want with the 100 days–take a holiday from Gisela if you wish and stick Bubbles the Clown in for a day.

]]> By: Marcus Speh https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-31 Sat, 28 May 2011 16:18:40 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-31 this is one of my favorite pieces of your writing. the first paragraph already blew me away. – jealous that you can change POV. makes me feel stuck in my own narrative as i’m struggling to connect with others (i know, i know, you said i should relax) and live on frozen lasagna (i’m no carbs right now).

]]> By: Steve Veilleux https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-30 Sat, 28 May 2011 16:07:52 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-30 a moving piece – I’m not sure now whether to get an RV or a place by the lake. Love your pieces, Susan – they do generate a mood.

]]> By: susan https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-29 Sat, 28 May 2011 14:16:13 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-29 Actually, Innisfree is more MY ideal personally. I never had the urge to ramble (except in speech) but rather to hide.

]]> By: steve ersinghaus https://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-28 Sat, 28 May 2011 13:12:52 +0000 http://susangibb.net/blog3/?p=84#comment-28 Ah, Innisfree. I see Yeats all through this. Nice.

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