WRITING: morning metaphors

Sometimes,
in the light of sun
I cannot talk
to anyone,
as if in dark
of night and sleep
I tucked myself
away.

Slipping out,
pushing back
the fringed edges,
blinking at
the blinding rays
revealing,
I retreat.

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3 Responses to WRITING: morning metaphors

  1. Pax Nortona says:

    Insert a Trite Metaphor About a Corral

    This roundup covers the period from 30 July to 5 August 2004.

  2. Barb Rees says:

    I love your morning metaphors. When I’m teaching beginning writers workshops I’m always on the lookout for other writers who can paint pictures with exquisite metaphors. Looks like you’ve got it. Glad I found your site that I can refer other writers to. Keep up the great work!

  3. susan says:

    Thank you Barb, and you can bet that I appreciate the teachers of writing. The pictures are out there, we just learn how to put two different ones together to make it something new.

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