A bit of tweaking, some fleshing out, though still no setting as suggested by my friend Carolyn, but submitted in this form for workshopping: Download Only A Phone Call Away.pdf
Wondering if I somehow miss relating the transition point of character in letting it rest upon the reader’s shoulders…
Wondering if in cutting down and placing trust I leave instead a worrisome enigma…
In other words, am I contemporizing my narrative to the point of writing head-scratchers lately?
The Lost Children: A Charity Anthology