WRITING: Walking Away – Draft #3

While I do not want to grow this story any longer, I’ve taken critique into consideration as well as my own thoughts on it and fleshed out the characters a bit to create tension that could reasonably be seen as heading toward the ultimate resolution.  Changed some words around, repaired some technical glitches, and while there’s more to be done, feel a bit more confident of the believability of the scenario without making it too cliche and obvious.  Emotions are difficult things to handle in writing; they can turn on a dime.

Walking_Away_- Draft #3.pdf