Well yes, I do go back and edit throughout the day–it’s just a habit that tears me between the rush of a story completed and the knowledge that it could have been better. #3 is based on a roadtrip, #4 on change–or the perception or hope of change. Or, the unexpected change of self rather than other.
Still have to work something out about the setup, WordPress Page not being an update-able link, yet I don’t want to put the stories into this weblog as posts as I did with the hypertexts of last summer (as well as listing them on a single Page). So the technical, even in traditional text story, still influences presentation–neat!