Somewhere in the dark confines of the brain where templates hide there is a system, automatic, maybe non-controllable, for what is written.
Loose prose of story, Template #17; pulled and used when space produces something that the eyes have seen that need be written.
Standard format of story, Template #6: puts in avoided pronouns, verbs, clarity and flow.
I try to write a story on Template #17, or make a new one. But like Windows, there are several ways to do things, but only one will do the right thing even when you want to do it wrong.
The Lost Children: A Charity Anthology
We all choose our own game… yours seems pretty nifty!
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