WRITING: Keeping to Deadlines

So I have a dozen stories started and sitting on my desktop unfinished now for over a month, maybe more. But give me a deadline (and an inspirational prompt) and so far, I’ve kept up with the 100 Day Project with nary a pause. True, some of the stories come slower than others, but in my usual way, if I find that opening line, I run with it. Or more the case, it runs away by itself.

One of the things I don’t like about such tight deadlines (a story a day for 100 days) is that if it comes easily, that may be good or it may be telling of necessary editing. On the other hand, if it’s painfully pulled like brain taffy, then I wonder if it’s not human nature to just post it anyway and be done with it. This is not normally a habit of mine and not one I want to pick up. So far, #5 is still my favorite as far as story, subtlety, and humor within a short fiction. I hope that more of them will strike and stay with me that way.

So here they are at the 10-day mark, and there have been some wonderful pieces of art, stories, poems, videos, photographs, meals, flash, and other work that were if not for the commitment to this project, might not have been done. I’m sure they each have their favorite pieces and each piece was likely produced in a way not quite the same as the others. This is what’s good about participating in an effort that can only help one grow as an artist. Check them out here.

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LITERATURE: Absalom, Absalom! – Metafiction? And, Language

This, Chapter 8, has to be the toughest one yet. It took me a while to figure out that Quentin and his roommate, Shreve are telling the story yet again, but from a perspective of guessing and imagining what might have taken place. This seems on the edge of metafiction as they are “rewriting” the story that even so, has been changed so many times in this novel just from the various points of view. It’s an interesting technique, yet it is even more difficult to follow because of its speculative nature. And, of course, Faulkner’s manner of rambling on.

Such as this:

Because Bon would know what Henry was doing, just as he had always known what Henry was thinking since that first day when they had looked at one another. Maybe he would know all the better what Henry was doing because he did not know what he himself was going to do, that he would not know until all of a sudden some day it would burst clear and he would know then that he had known all the time, what it would be, so he didn’t have to bother about himself and so all he had to do was just to watch Henry trying to reconcile what he (Henry) knew he was going to do with all the voices of his heredity and training which said No. No. You cannot. You must not. You shall not. (p. 342)

And honestly, it doesn’t end there but continues in this vein for a few pages yet.  But here’s a succinct way of showing Fulkner’s style:

(“Listen,” Shreve said, cried. “It would be while..)  (p. 339)

And again:

(…) then Henry said suddenly, cried suddenly: (p. 342)

Why say it once when twice will do?

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REALITY?: Traditional Memorial Day Weekends

No more parades, and the veterans in our family died out with Jim’s dad but the guns going off in the silence of a cemetery will always stay with me. I pray for other families hoping they don’t have to hear it too soon. War and death are inevitable and the feelings  of anger mingle with pride; despair a bridge towards hope.

Another tradition for me has always been putting in the vegetable garden. Just a matter of a few miles and altitude changes have taught me to be patient with summer. This year I’ve finally decided that the garden had to be moved from its spot because the trees have grown so tall that it gets little sun. Since the pool’s been taken down and was in a sunnier spot, that’s where I’m working this weekend.

Three bags of peat moss, three of humus, and ten of organic gardening soil (got too tired of digging out some from the woods) and I’m still hoe-ing up sand that I suspect is not just the base of the pool area but Burlington soil itself. See the neighbors told me after we moved in that the topsoil was scraped off and sold. What they left would drain straight through to China.

Lot of work and I’m out of shape and don’t move as easily as I once did. Though I’ve got to admit that I try. At least behind Agway’s this morning I loaded the car myself off the pallets with 40 lb. bags rather than wait for the guy to appear. Next to me, two burly guys in a pickup truck stood and waited for their guy to show up. I used to be able to pick up my own weight–100 lbs. at the time. But that was a couple decades ago.

And the man is away. A last visit to a buddy in PA dying of cancer.

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WRITING: Opportunities

I’m glad I decided to start each morning out with a story–throughout the summer but maybe beyond that if I’m still of the mind.

Today’s subject was “perspective” and for me, that just conjured up all kinds of things since it’s the topic I most love to consider, to ponder, to argue, to use as an answer when I just don’t agree with the rest of the world. Even though it came a bit more slowly, though I didn’t have a clue where it was going, it started out as usual with the opening scenario, the opening line. From there it progressed scene by scene until the characters waved their goodbyes.

But what fun! To go back and see things that are double entendre, or reinforcements or metaphors that I simply didn’t realize I’d written! Today’s story, #5 In The Eye, is my favorite so far and I tend to like the lightness of it that belies the statement it makes.

The thing about writing on a regular basis–and personally, I need a deadline, real or imagined, that has something or someone stricter than me as an overseer–is that the ideas will come, the words will roll themselves out, and with the opportunity comes not only practice but improvement.

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WRITING: Stories 3 and 4

Well yes, I do go back and edit throughout the day–it’s just a habit that tears me between the rush of a story completed and the knowledge that it could have been better. #3 is based on a roadtrip, #4 on change–or the perception or hope of change. Or, the unexpected change of self rather than other.

Still have to work something out about the setup, WordPress Page not being an update-able link, yet I don’t want to put the stories into this weblog as posts as I did with the hypertexts of last summer (as well as listing them on a single Page). So the technical, even in traditional text story, still influences presentation–neat!

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REALITY?: Earth-Moving

So for a few years now the trees have grown to the point where the garden gets only a few hours daily of strong sunlight. Also for a few years, the pool has been disassembled and gone (or mostly so; a metal cutter is needed to take down the deck). It is fairly logical then that the old garden be turned into lawn and the pool area be upgraded to garden.

There were a few things to consider before this could be done: whether there was a layer of crushed stone beneath the smooth sand (there isn’t, hooray!); whether the area could be converted via the Miracle of The Soil into fertility (peat moss, lime, and some earth from the woods); and whether it could be easily fenced in from critters. Aye, there’s the rub.

As soon as I swung the first touch of the hoe, a rabbit darted out from a clump of ferns and weeds that had grown beneath the pool decking. A mama wabbit, most likely; not a single gal I can scare away from the area where, naturally, I don’t think the inclusion of rabbits among vegies is the most productive concept.

So back inside I tromp, ready to complain here and then get on Google and find out how long it’s going to take for baby wabbits to be safely moved. Does mama move them, like a cat or a dog? Will they find a place as suitable? I don’t care for stewed rabbit so that’s out…

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WRITING: Story #2

Watched Timmons’ starting video this morning and knew exactly what my story was going to be. Started once again with the opening line and trusted it to stay strong all day while I was away before I wrote it down. It was still there when I came home. Story #2 Lies, is based on a film clip of a beautiful woman primping in the mirror as a voice muses the concept of face transplants.

Because I hadn’t really planned this whole thing, I simply put up a page (permanent link to the right, 100 Days – 100 Stories 2010) and the top entry will be the newest, just as weblogs work. However, since I’m writing the stories in Tinderbox, I may just attempt to put up an html template for each so that perhaps if I get into hypertext or images with text, it’ll be more consistent. So the format may change. Or not.

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LITERATURE: Absalom, Absalom! – Simile Explained

While it is the at the core of his style, Faulkner’s use of metaphor and simile are weird. The purpose of these elements of writing are to give the reader a quick, readily recognizable, usually visual, word or phrase that will explain a statement by the comparison: sharp as a razor, flat as a board, a body of steel, etc. But here’s what Faulkner does with simile:

“(…) and he said how he thought there was something about a man’s destiny (or about the man) that caused the destiny to shape itself to him like his clothes did, like the same coat that new might have fitted a thousand men, yet after one man has worn it for a while it fits no one else and you can till it anywhere you see it even if all you see is a sleeve or a lapel”  p. 245

Quentin is recounting his father’s words of his grandfather’s conversation with Sutpen, and so, describing Sutpen’s thoughts on destiny. Comparing it to the fit of a coat is appropriate for Sutpen wore the same clothes for years and the explanation makes the reader make the connection between Sutpen’s opinion and his actions–though Faulkner takes care of doing that for us as well.

What intrigues me is that many find Faulkner so difficult to follow, yet here he is explaining even his similes.

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WRITING: A Start

A beautiful film clip by John Timmons has inspired a short story that wanders from the beauty into the darker happenings of relationships.

I’m going to try to keep up with writing a short piece every day taking a bit of John’s work and finding where else it may go. What I’d like to do is pound one out as soon as the thought hits, then spend some time editing and polishing it so that I don’t end up with a hundred mediocre flash pieces at the end of summer. I may wander into hypertext and poetry, stories of various lengths, or even images if that’s what comes through, but basically, I’d like to stick to story and part of the editing will be to decide if each piece is a story, or a fiction.

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LITERATURE: Absalom, Absalom! – Characters

Faulkner does tend to like a small crew as his protagonist personality–perhaps a makeup of the raw textures of each that bring together a specter of a main character that is an extension of each, and a representative of man.

Each is defined by interaction with others, reaction to events, and in this particular novel, by another character’s version of a situation in which the character played a part. Notably unusual is the retelling of the whole background by Shreve, a college roommate of Quentin’s. Faulkner is giving us more information via this path, put in the way that a listener (or reader for that matter) might recount what he has heard to insure that he has understood it well. But so much more is revealed in the retelling, new facts, new perspective, even as Faulkner follows the story in time and allows for side trails while reinforcing the history already laid out.

It also is telling of the characters. In Chapter Six, we’ve gotten a bit more background on Quentin himself; back to his childhood investigation of the Sutpen homestead in decay. Pieces come together from what he remembers and what he has been told.

The characters in a Fulkner novel are always strangely tied together through blood, loyalty, environment. In this case, Judith, who was only engaged to marry Charles Bon before he died, takes in the child of his common law wife and while keeping him there at the estate, still does him no favors in the way he is treated for he grows up resentful of both his Negro and his white background.

Faulkner uses his characters as links to each other. Particularly with the offspring of affairs versus marriage, the lines are traced through the years to braid into new generations. The use of a college roommate of Quentin’s to retell the story brings to mind the college friendship of Sutpen’s son Henry, and Charles Bon, where so much of the drama has started.

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WRITING: & Projects

I won’t go over the whole thing again here, but on Hypercompendia I posted about organizing my efforts, both in hypertext and traditional, in Tinderbox and what that has revealed to me: the need to write more regularly and edit or toss old stuff. What I think I’m going to do through this summer is write a short piece daily–I’m better with deadlines than leaving it up to my own lazy self–along with this year’s 100 Days 2010.

It was an intense but productive summer last year and I don’t think I have the drive and confidence to make myself do it unless I believe that I’m supposed to (there they are again, the black shrouded nuns of my youth), and I’m easily fooled into believing whatever I choose.

There are currently about a dozen story files on my desktop that range anywhere from an opening sentence to a fully complete (but not something I’m happy with) story. In a main file, there are dozens of stories that I really need to rewrite or just inadvertently drop into the blackness of lost.

And I will have to clean some stories to the point where I’m just so anxious to have someone read them that I’ll submit since I haven’t submitted much for a while except in a few spurts of ambition.

Should be a fun summer.

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WRITING: Language and Perception

From the New Scientist tweet this morning: Kew’s “code-breaker” saves world’s smallest lily from extinction http://bit.ly/5QCJU

But if you think about it, wouldn’t failure to “save” not change the fact that we would still have a (new) world’s smallest lily (or anything else, largest, smallest, shortest, tallest, greenest, etc.) ad infinitum until we ran out of lilies?

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WRITING: Some Articles on Short Stories, MFAs, & Online Publishing

It started with this article by Jason Sanford, sent to me by Dorothee Lang (Blue Print Review), Who Wears Short Shorts, Micro Stories and MFA Disgust. in StorySouth.

Jason brings up some valid points about the changes in the literary market:

That’s right—being a writer in today’s lovely world of fiction and creative nonfiction is like reliving 70’s TV hell, where that Nair commercial jingle has been conveniently rewritten into “Who writes short shorts?” Poetic vision rarely shows up. After all, how can you express vision in 100 words? As for plot and character development, give those antiquated goods to Goodwill. All that matters with short shorts is a competent writing style and a desire for lots of publication credits.

Now I don’t necessarily agree with the “all that matters” statement, since there are many fine publications with editors that are still looking for story even if its only six words long. But from the writer’s point of view, it’s fairly easy to rack up a bunch of publishing credits with the mountain of new online journals cropping up every month. Nowadays, it’s more common to cross your fingers and hope they don’t get bored with the whole thing and pull the plug and that’s where the time and worry is spent on the part of the writer if your piece has been accepted–with record speed.

While Mr. Sanford goes on to explain what a short piece is capable of doing, he has argument with what is passing for short story:

Instead of demonstrating depth and vision, 99% of the published short shorts are merely sight gags, inside jokes, scene descriptions, or scattered details from some writer’s life. Yet this is exactly what currently passes for quality writing in the world of short shorts. The editors of Brevity, an online magazine for nonfiction short shorts (published on the site of the highly venerated Creative Nonfiction), say as much in their guidelines: “Brevity publishes concise literary nonfiction of 750 words or less focusing on detail and scene over thought and opinion.” Detail and scene over thought and opinion? For the record, detail and scene do not a story make, any more than slapped-together descriptions of your last Disney World vacation make a poem.

I have to agree; I just recently posted on this as a matter of fact. I’ve seen too many such ‘stories’ that I’d consider only a single event out of a story. We are given no depth of background of character nor any hint of what’s ahead for him. It seems that the short story–flash, let’s call it, though I’ve seen longer stories be as inept in creating a narrative–is a case of writers thinking that they too can do it and anything goes. Similar to how free-form verse both added a wealth of creative freedom as well as a helluvalotta crappy poetry.

Sanford goes on to debunk the theory that flash fiction is the result of demand from a society that is in Time Warp #10. Then he tackles the universities that churn out Creative Writing Majors with no sense of ingenuity but who at least don’t make as many mistakes since the short format may inhibit excess description and setting. Sanford sums up (though I would strongly recommend reading the whole article) with this:

The problem with most short shorts is not the genre—it is that they are being written by writers who are not committed to the true exploration of voice that’s at the heart of great literature.

Next I read Ann Pino’s Five Great Reasons for Novelists to Write Flash. And here I agree that just as with poetry teaching metaphor, brevity, and imagery, flash offers the writer the opportunity to exercise the editing and rewriting skills:

Writing flash requires you to be ruthless, aggressively paring anything that doesn’t add value to your story.

Then comes the kicker, touching on the question of online publishing, Eliza Victoria, in Online Publications: Who Benefits? names names. There has always been the question of publication value; some, such as the New Yorker, being considered in the uppermost eschelon with several tiers established by longevity and quality of writing pyramiding beneath them. Now the new question of online versus print tried to establish itself as a standard of valuation but that’s not working as more and more of the creme de la creme have found it necessary to at least partially go online in order to maintain readership.

Eliza points out the obvious:

So: why an online publication? From the viewpoint of a publisher, one factor to consider is that online publishing is cheap. Compared to a print publication, an online publication is easy to set up that it can actually begin – and even remain – a one-man endeavor. For example, the now defunct (and quite brilliant) Lone Star Stories listed only one person under “Staff” – publisher and editor Eric Marin.

To start an online publication, all you need is a web-publishing platform (Expanded Horizons, for example, publishes using WordPress), good internet connection, submission guidelines, and time that can be devoted to going through the pile of submissions. Compare this with the money you’ll have to shell out in order to produce your first print issue, factoring in the cost of printing, distribution, and the like.

I’ve published magazines. Since high school, three of ’em. I’ve edited when cut and paste literally meant scissors and Rubber Cement (so you could move columns and ads around). Changing typeface, sizes, adding images, all that’s so much easier with a computer and so much cheaper and faster than working with a printer. Time and money both saved. And more pros for e-zines:

For a writer, online publications also have their appeal. The online space is a site for experimentation, as shown by Adam David’s use of hypertext in his short story *snip*. On a more practical level, submissions to online publications are also cheaper to transmit, as a writer only has to e-mail a story, or submit via an online submission system. This beats the traditional method–printing out a manuscript, buying stamps, enclosing a SASE and lining up in a post office–by a mile.

And the biggest plus of all for the writer: with so many–like hundreds and hundreds–to submit to without cost and easy as pushing a button, the hardest part is keeping track of what was sent where. Another barrier broken down by internet publication is the “no simultaneous submission” statement that most writers, often waiting six months for a reply, lied about anyway. (I didn’t, but then the Catholic rose  in me and the face of an angry nun causes sweat to form and I just couldn’t do it.) This of course means that anybody who thinks they can write (an estimated 95% of the population) is sitting in their jammies writing single-paragraph stories and bombarding the market with their words.

So yes, there’s good and bad news with all that technology opens up. I believe that as the print/online status question fades into the background, replaced by the short/long dilemma, there will always be a standard that fine writing sets for itself.

Do read the articles and follow the links offered.

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BLOGGING: Spam’s Getting Smarter

Luckily not so smart that it doesn’t get caught up in Akismet nets however. But just read this one, as one of the finer examples:

“Hello, I have been reading your sites content for a while now, actually, probably since you started. It consists of very intriguing and informative content. I love to start my day off at times just by browsing through and seeing if there is anything new up on the site. Good work, I really hope you can get in touch with me and we can possibly have a chat together. Would love that.”

Yeah, me too; I’d just love having a chat with a place that sells imitation designer handbags.

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REALITY?: The Reaping Before the Sowing

Along with the rhubarb and parsley, the chives were ready today to be picked.

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