STORYSPACE: Just like in linear story…
… you call the guy’s eyes deep as chocolate when just a few writing spaces back you compared them to the icy Arctic sea.
This is one of those things that you reread and edit for because the two descriptions were written years apart. The chocolate being added this morning.
But boyohboy, it’s kind of necessary for his eyes to be dark for both this spot of story and another I’ve put in just beyond it.
So the sea ice blue may have to go–but not before I’ve checked all the the stories since I know that the word "eyes" was used as a link in some areas. This is where Storyspace shines: All I need do is put in "eyes" which is on the list of keywords, and it’ll show me where the word comes up. Then I’ll assess damages one way or the other and adjust.
Neat, eh? Almost makes you want to screw up just so you can have the fun of fiddling some more.