STORYSPACE & PROJECTS: Brillo Mapping
Trying to get this project done and over with but the map is starting to look like a Brillo pad. That’s because in my own bumbling manner I’ve been hesitant to actually cut the ties that have held the story together up to this major overhaul. I’m still not sure that the basic premise of the theory I’m depending upon is sound so I’ve got Plan B still in effect.
There are natural breaks in the narratives but do they melt easily enough into the break of one of the other threads? It’s not as simple or as dopey as linking tongue to tongue anymore. It’s got to be a smooth transition but it still has to hit with an obvious we’re not in Kansas anymore appeal. I may be reverting to an old bad habit here of not trusting the reader. Gotta get my head together on this. Storyspace is making it easy enough to make these editing changes; I just have to do my part.
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