100 DAYS PROJECT: #70
Just Words
Another marital conversation that has deeper meaning underlying the words. A storm as metaphor. A narrative arc that circles back onto itself, but this time, with a completely new meaning to the words spoken.
The links are specifically geared to allow the reader to choose to follow the story by dialogue alone, or with the interjections of action and scenario.
I think that this, next to #51 Snakes and Snails, is one of my personal favorites. With the simple words “I thought you said it would stop,” from Steve’s story, the implication immediately came to mind of what “it” might be. While there is still some tweaking to do here, I think that even in its simplicity it does use the hypertext form well.
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