100 DAYS PROJECT: #74

August 3rd, 2009 by susan


Black Clouds Gathering

74blackcloudsWell you know, hypertext doesn’t necessarily mean there have to be alternate pathways.

This story could have been another of my conversation with background but yet because of its nature, it needed to be conversational only to avoid giving away the ending. So it’s not a good representation of hypertext technology and yet I believe that the hypertext form of presentation, that is, one page at a time, greatly adds to the impact of a story such as this. One’s eyes cannot slip down the page to the end sentence nor flip to the last page in the book; one must follow step by step.

2 Responses to “100 DAYS PROJECT: #74”

  1. Neha Says:

    A) Commenting on your blog is good for my math.

    B) I love the simplicity of this piece. Nicely done.

  2. admin Says:

    Sorry about the CAPTCHA; had to do it to help cut back on resource use (robots).

    Thanks. I tried to get all the arguments that arise with any migration in history.